…well sort of
I showed my common app essay to a teacher in my school’s writing center today for the second time, and I think she genuinely liked it. My first draft was absolutely horrid, which I showed to her last week, so maybe she’s just comparing them, but I’d like to think that she enjoyed it. My only problem is really the last paragraph, which gets vague and too symbol-y, but I’m going to work on it tonight and hopefully make some of the *final* edits and then show it to her tomorrow.
It’s a pretty personal essay, so it’s hard for me to share it with other people, but I think once I submit it, I’ll post it here.